tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-797694431066109370.post8840245556459317268..comments2023-09-16T07:30:15.724-07:00Comments on Something Awesome: My Octoberaudshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16636783866908056042noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-797694431066109370.post-38677263058258417322008-12-06T17:08:00.000-08:002008-12-06T17:08:00.000-08:00heehee, the little orange robot reminds me of Papr...heehee, the little orange robot reminds me of Paprika! :D I'm especially fond of the robot's flat, featureless face and the little glowbug <3Cibohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288482578182333575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-797694431066109370.post-16637740562185078152008-11-13T07:42:00.000-08:002008-11-13T07:42:00.000-08:00This illustration still rocks. That said, here's ...This illustration still rocks. That said, here's my two cents:<BR/><BR/>The color of your light is a cool yellow, which is kind of a detriment to our connecting with the character. You might want to either move it more towards red/orange, or make the flesh on the kid a little bit more red/orange.<BR/><BR/>I think you should continue to paint on the little boy until there aren't any more solid lines on him. Tell the story with gradients, and leave the lines on the robot for contrast.DPM ArtisTronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14284706986840445138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-797694431066109370.post-78661514196385733252008-11-12T14:41:00.000-08:002008-11-12T14:41:00.000-08:00Do it!Do it!Mike Monroehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07216669852345128298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-797694431066109370.post-62157830578108493482008-11-12T10:21:00.000-08:002008-11-12T10:21:00.000-08:00Would you like critique on this?Would you like critique on this?DPM ArtisTronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14284706986840445138noreply@blogger.com